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We only scratched the surface
Contributed by
ATG
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Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 07:16:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Its Not So Long now,
We will only scratched the surface.
But there is a moment of time for a memory,
It grabs you while you gaze absently
it may become distant and unreal,
But it lasts for an eternity.
The Sand between your toes,
the touch of the sea,
the voice of the ocean,
and the kiss of the sun.
Although the breeze is broken by a Jet.
and you are gazing through the clouds.
They etch the story in the skies.
I know its not been long,
Wed only scratch the surface,
but endings are inevitable,
though they seem distant and unreal,
they can last for an eternity.
The Breeze swept away the sand,
no cushion beneath my feet,
it blew the sun away
and took the oceans voice.
despite this all,
I grudge only that jet,
That has taken you away.
It has been so long,
We had only scratched the surface,
now distant and unreal.
It will last an eternity.
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ATG
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2009-06-05 07:16:55]
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Re: We only scratched the surface
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by elle on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 05:43:36 AM AEST
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| prelude to a miss. . . heh? nice write. peace. elle |
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