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Pretty Ballerinas
Contributed by
windowguy
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Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 08:20:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Pretty pink ballerinas
Danced all in a row
On thin, tenuous stems
Their beauty they did show.
Such pretty pink petals
Hung carefree in warm air
And stirred a sense of happiness
Simply by just by being there.
Did I hear a tinkling sound
As a gentle summer breeze
Blew amid the flowers
The bushes and the trees?
Their dance was so special
I just had to stand and pause,
Looking in admiration
I prepared my applause.
But then, they gave an encore
A delightful little ballet,
Such beautiful Ballerinas,
In their presence I had to stay!
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windowguy
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2009-06-05 08:20:27]
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Re: Pretty Ballerinas
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by Writing4Him on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 10:33:29 AM AEST
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| What a great poem! I hate to be critical of this amazing work, but would you like to change the word 'pretty' to something perhaps less common, or more descriptive? Just an idea. Anyhow, I loved this! |
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Re: Pretty Ballerinas
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by elle on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 01:32:39 PM AEST
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| It's a charming write. . . very light & delicious. elle |
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Re: Pretty Ballerinas
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 02:30:44 PM AEST
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Light and whimsical..I love this....
Jenni |
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