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Ugly Day
Contributed by
Richard1506
on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 04:19:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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What an ugly cloud
What an ugly drop
What an ugly storm
Wish the rain would stop.
What an ugly boy
What an ugly brat
I would wear a mask
With a face like that
What an ugly girl
Such an ugly child
Those ugly genes
Have been running wild
What an ugly drain
What an ugly spout
But, wait a minute
The suns coming out.
What a lovely girl
What a lovely place
What a lovely world
Such a pretty face.
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Richard1506
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2009-06-19 04:19:46]
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Re: Ugly Day
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by Inevitable on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 08:10:48 AM AEST
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Interesting, very interesting.
Ambiguous, though.
I liked the pattern and how the
ending turned from hostile
to sweet.
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Re: Ugly Day
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 11:39:54 AM AEST
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Hey! The rain's not all that bad! You shouldn't let it get you down..
Nice write tho...
Welcome to YPDC.... Hope to read more from you..
Jenni
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