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~I danced on your flame~
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 03:16:01 PM in AEST
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We just walked back wards tonight, you and I, from then until now, back again.
we met full circle, a stroll into the shadows, facing the evil that is you.
Did you feel the heat in my eyes? Oh yes you did,I can match your fire, now.
The moon won over the blackness, you couldnt hide from me in the pale.
I caught the dark in your eyes and a smirk for a moment,
not so funny now? Tonight our souls collided, you felt it, as I danced on your flame.
So go now and slink back into the dark, never to darken my doorway again,
remember,I can feel you,you wont haunt me now,maybe it will be the other way around.
Dancing on your flame,,,,,,,,,,,
~Michelle~
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Re: ~I danced on your flame~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th March 2016 @ 02:10:36 AM AEST
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| Pretty damn cool, Michelle! |
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Re: ~I danced on your flame~
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by duff on
Friday, 8th April 2016 @ 12:12:24 AM AEST
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| I love the title. Can/'/t get away from it. Powerful and saying so much. That line I keep coming back to |
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Re: ~I danced on your flame~
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by Harsh on
Wednesday, 13th April 2016 @ 12:46:35 AM AEST
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| That/'/s a damn fine write....great work...loved it |
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Re: ~I danced on your flame~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 14th April 2016 @ 12:40:54 PM AEST
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great expression, beautifully penned!
hugs, woofies n love nessa |
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Re: ~I danced on your flame~
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Thursday, 5th May 2016 @ 09:38:12 PM AEST
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From the title to the last word. A great write.
Fox |
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Re: ~I danced on your flame~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2016 @ 08:51:00 PM AEST
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| I feel your strength but also your pain. I hope you have been well all these years dear friend |
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