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One more chance for one more chance!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:27:46 PM in AEST
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Give me one more chance,
And maybe I can make you see,
That with one more chance,
You may love me endlessly.
I am so afraid to be alone,
I am sorry I hurt you,
I am afraid to even go home,
I wish you knew what I was going through.
I am sorry for the pain I brought,
I wish I could take it all away,
Without you, agony is my only thought,
I need one more chance at one more day.
I know how it feels to be another one in need,
You saw a side of me, no one could see,
My life has not been the same,
I am as ashamed as I can be.
There was a time my dreams felt so real,
With you they where from the heart,
Just within reach, a dream that could heal,
Then you ended the dream before the start.
I doubt that I will ever find,
If there is a way,
A way to get out,
Get out of feeling alone every day.
Lately I've been thinking maybe,
That this is my last dance,
That you will not come back to me,
Maybe that was my last second chance.
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Re: One more chance for one more chance!
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:52:25 PM AEST
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A lot of emotion in this one.
Let's hope you get another chance. ;o)
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Re: One more chance for one more chance!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 02:22:17 AM AEST
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I wish for another chance every day - I made the mistake of ending what could have been the greatest love and relationship I would have ever known. Now not only do I regret that, I also wish that he would just give me another chance to right the wrongs.
A beautiful poem, one that I'm sure many can relate to. |
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Re: One more chance for one more chance!
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:01:58 PM AEST
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My how I enjoyed this poem of yours.
We are all imperfect, so they say, and so we should realize every single day....we are going to say and do things that we regret the same way....but if you really love a person, you will be giving him or her another chance, and if they really love you they too will do likewise. I really enjoyed reading this poem, shows how we in many ways are so alike...
and the open heart you have to share, was the poem's highlite.
Thank you,
Lovingcritters
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Re: One more chance for one more chance!
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:20:58 PM AEST
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| Just ripped emotion from me. I know this place as I have been there too many times too count. At some point you gotta turn around and say goodbye though. Great write man. Very damn good. |
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