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Boy
Contributed by
pinkashes
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I''m questioning
I''m in between
How can this
love last?
I''m sick of you
don''t laugh at me
make things right
before you become the past
this time has played
an ugly game
where my heart has moved on
and your heart still lies awake
I hate this place
this in between
where fake smiles
extinguish the space
eyes are empty
hugs are cold
and praying souls
don''t heal the void
I''m reaching for you
trying to hang on
but my heart
just isn''t in it
I''m hitting insanity
questioning you and me
I''m in between
my dream and reality
Copyright ©
pinkashes
... [
2004-03-23 20:19:57]
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Re: Boy
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:23:28 PM AEST
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erg, that's where you start talking to the person buddy! lol, good write, good write... ;0)
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Re: Boy
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:41:06 PM AEST
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Good write.. you definatly need to get some strength though and define your emotions for one another.. love is not a game to play.. once you mess it up or take the wrong turn.. your done.. the game has ended.. and ones love is ruined and will never look for again.. inbrace one another and find out the true meanings..
luck to you..
~neglected1~ |
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