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Mr. Jenkis
Contributed by
TheSchroedmeister
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:04:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Mr. Jenkis played the piano,
With chords and music
And love
I used to listen to
The music,
In the winter time,
And he would play
Me a tune
The world stole him,
And me
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TheSchroedmeister
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2004-03-23 22:04:37]
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Re: Mr. Jenkis
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:29:05 PM AEST
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| what a dear loving poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Mr. Jenkis
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:33:26 AM AEST
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| Short poem but it speaks volumes. You froze a friendship in time and captured its essence well. |
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Re: Mr. Jenkis
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:43:11 PM AEST
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Hmn. The world stole him? I'm trying to figure out if you're meaning the music or the moment . . . or both?
Regardless - its a momentous, yet short piece.
Well done.
Keep writing!!
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Re: Mr. Jenkis
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:44:16 PM AEST
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Hmn. The world stole him? I'm trying to figure out if you're meaning the music or the moment . . . or both?
Regardless - its a momentous, yet short piece.
Well done.
Keep writing!!
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Re: Mr. Jenkis
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:01:18 PM AEST
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Very nice write. :) I love your style and the title for some reason caught me. Thanks.
Lindsey |
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Re: Mr. Jenkis
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:13:37 AM AEST
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You have such variety in your writing. I appreciate your style. This is nice. So much emotion in its simplicity.
Stitch |
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Re: Mr. Jenkis
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by Juliet on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:26:50 PM AEST
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| Very pretty and with good emotion. Expresses the feeling perfectly. |
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