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My Own Innocence
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:53:14 AM in AEST
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im running through fields of innocence
stopping to pick up the dead
longing to back but come to far
im wondering the streets at night
flirting with the temptations of angelic sin
lifting up my wings to find there broken
my haylo left on the ground
dead isnt the word
i cannot think of it my emotions to high
im crawling to existence
my heart bounces against my skin
i can feel it ripple then start again
my bearings as a child
have left me scared
and scard on the outside and in
im falling downwards
the rocks seem to crumble under my fingertips
i cant hold on
my own fate
my decision
my life of innocence
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-10 11:53:14]
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Re: My Own Innocence
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by Sirena_Degana on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:09:29 PM AEST
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dark and mysterious.....makes you think!!!
Blessed Be!!!! |
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Re: My Own Innocence
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:59:11 PM AEST
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Very vivid and well-expressed. Hold on! Innocence we cannot keep, but we can trade it for wisdom. Don't lose it all in the dark!
Blessings
Andrew |
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Re: My Own Innocence
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:20:35 AM AEST
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| great write. |
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