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The Truth
Contributed by
Mesano
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:47:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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With every joy, comes equal pain,
Every tear, a drop of rain,
With every death, another life,
The world moves on - sheath your knife.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2004-10-22 15:47:47]
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Re: The Truth
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by theMoth on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:50:53 PM AEST
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I hope you give it a title.
These four lines
accomplish a great poem.
It is small, but not just
adequate.
Every word of it matters.
--Mothy |
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Re: The Truth
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:19:02 PM AEST
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| amazing write. brilliant in fact. |
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Re: The Truth
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by Gimpie on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:28:41 PM AEST
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| short, but really good. Every line has meaning and you did a great job. :) good luck with a title |
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Re: The Truth
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by wray on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:24:58 AM AEST
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| Perfect truth eloquently spoken. I like the serenity promoted by the advice in the final line - things happen, life is a continuous cycle, accept it and go with the flow. Well doen =) |
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Re: The Truth
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by Dawny on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:47:07 AM AEST
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Brilliant!!! You capture so much in so few words, very well done
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: The Truth
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:50:10 PM AEST
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| Very true. Very insperational. Thank you. |
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Re: The Truth
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by Bookworm484 on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:39:02 PM AEST
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Absolute Brill!
-Your Friend |
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