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momoe
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:56:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It took a year.
It took a year to write down your name.
A year without you,
A year full of hurt.
I still cant believe that you're not here.
It's taken me a year to write down how I feel,
And still I cant find the words.
I do want to say goodbye...
I do want to say I miss you...
I do want to say I'm sorry...
I never wanted you to leave me,
But now you are gone, now everyone's gone.
You came when I needed you, you left and it hurt me.
A year without you,
A year full of hurt.
God I miss you,
Just want to see you...
Just want to laugh again...
Just want to need you...
God I miss you.
You are forever my Momoe, my Momoe Ittaliano.
And forever I will need you...
It's taken me a year to write down how I feel,
And still this doesn't cover the loss I suffered when you went away.
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Re: momoe
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by EverlastingDawn on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 07:21:36 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. You might want to try breaking up the text into multiple stanzas though. The emotions were expressed extremely well. Great write |
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