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Product Of Rape
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:46:04 AM in AEST
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I was created out of an act of rape,
My mum kept me broke all the red tape,
I hate knowing what my father did,
At school they call me the rape kid.
My mum even looks at my very strange,
I think she wishes she could change,
Make it so I wasnt a constant reminder,
I am in between her & sanity, like a divider.
She looks at me & she sees that awful man,
I try to comfort her, do all I can,
But she pushes me away screams at me,
Tells me that badness is all she can see.
I sit up alone in my room isolated,
All day suicide is heavily contemplated,
I hate being me knowing how I was born,
I hate being ugly hate being the rapists spawn.
If I were ever to meet my father, the beast,
Id tear him limb from limb, piece by piece,
All I ever want is to be loved, for someone to care,
But I am totally alone no-one is ever there.
It makes me so ill to even think about,
How my father laughed as he heard my mum shout,
How he got his perverted little kicks,
What he did to my mum wasnt just cruel, but sick.
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pixie
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by pander on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:54:00 AM AEST
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A very moving piece of work, and a bit of a departure of topic for you Pixie.
It's good to see how you can change the mood of your work with everything you write. One moment you deliver something full of hope and hapiness. The next a dark write such as this. That is the true talent of a gifted writer. If only we could all do that.
Luv,
Pander
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:07:15 AM AEST
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| written with such intensity leaving me dumbstruck and shocked, so much evil out there, and this poem showed the backlash in all its harshness, so vivid so real, like a broken seal this poem welled tears, by you it is beautifully written with such intense realism. |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:44:47 AM AEST
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What a poem here Pixie you have created with such a clear message of how our society has gone so wrong. We should not have to live life with evil things in the back of our minds that actually restrict us from enjoying life to the fullest. The jails and prisons are all over crowed thus leaving many evil doers on the streets inflicting evelness upon good people. Through poets like yourself and myself and many others, maybe we can get this ugly message of reality out so good people can live life maintaining some kind of awareness guard against evilness. Great job, and it seems like I am writing a book here when its supposed to be a message box lol. Your Dear Friend.
MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:01:23 AM AEST
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oh pixie this is such a declaration!....and so sad at the same time! A wonderful piece of emotion, I hope getting this on paper helped you out a bit hon! Great job....
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by tifrob on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:07:47 AM AEST
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How truly sad. Words can't touch the feelings this poem evoks. I can only say I hope you did this poem by imagination. As opposed to first hand or second hand knowledge. Great piece of work.
J~ |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:39:22 AM AEST
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This was an excellent poem... so sad... and full of emotion... i can only say i hope this has not actually happenend to you... just like the other person who has said this to you... but if it has happened to you i am so sorry... hopefully you have found a little piece in sharing it with other... great write...
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by reprobate on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:55:42 PM AEST
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sad...so,so sad. good job.
thanks for sharing.
(hey, i don't normally plug my stuff but i think you should check a poem i wrote. it's called 'a palette of pain'. something that happened the week i moved here) |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by katyqueen35 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 02:29:48 AM AEST
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| Wow pixie this poem is really really sad .It put tears to my eyes reading this.great job. |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:16:42 AM AEST
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oh god, this is so sad and painful.. im sure it was hard to write; thankyou for sharing it.
charlotte xxx |
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Re: Product Of Rape
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:03:27 PM AEST
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You have the most talent ever. This piece of work literally brought me to tears, I happend to read it in class, and everyone else who read it had tears in there eyes. I agree with the others that I hope this did not happen to you. Also I would like to say thank you for sharing...
Lotsa Of Love
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