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CHILD MISSING
Contributed by
LEMMEN
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:48:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She arose from her bed yelled
out a death scream.
For she found that her child
Was missing.
Was nowhere to be found.
She yelled for her husband
but he had gone to taken
Their child.
No letter, No note just up
And vanish with no clue.
She was lost in what to do,
Family was gone,
No friends in town,
911 wasn't even around.
She cried till she had enough.
Went to the basement and grab
the biggest gun loaded it up
and went for a hunt.
She got to the door dried her
Eyes open the door.
SURPRISE HAPPY BIRTHDAY MOMMY.
Standing there in front of her.
Her child with a gift.
What she has always wanted for
the last ten years a pair of
Diamond earring's.
Tears stream down her face.
Grab her child her husband to
said I'm sorry for not trusting
In you.
He smile and said
I LOVE YOU.
Me to mommy
I love you.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-11-13 08:48:14]
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Re: CHILD MISSING
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:55:13 AM AEST
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| Cool poem though a little strange in a sense, guess that is just me. written well painting freaky visuals, and chilling realiztions, and what alot of mothers truely fear. |
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Re: CHILD MISSING
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:43:20 PM AEST
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OMG Dennis...you scared the **** out of me with this one.....
Good write tho..
Jenni |
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Re: CHILD MISSING
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by givingin on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:51:37 AM AEST
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OMG! this was so scary until "happy birthday"
I was so worried!
great write.
Keep it up.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: CHILD MISSING
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:52:40 AM AEST
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Very good write. The suspense on finding out had me going and then when it got to the happy birthday part it was like wow this is a very good write!!!
Blessed be
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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