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The feilds are filled
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:30:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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the fields are filled
with countless dreams
while cuts and bruses
rush down stream
while time tomorow
is a new day brought
the fields are filled
with words uncaught
things unsayed
and left undone
words brought to
and the child runs
already escaping
life passes me by
and all is left
is a dream to die
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2005-03-02 22:30:25]
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Re: The feilds are filled
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:37:19 PM AEST
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very good writting.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The feilds are filled
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by darkremains on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:41:43 PM AEST
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a very emotive ending.
I like |
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Re: The feilds are filled
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 07:01:25 AM AEST
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| cool |
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Re: The feilds are filled
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by visualizing_life on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:53:11 PM AEST
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| i like it...i understand completely...good rite...very emotional...luv |
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