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Step by Step
Contributed by
Mystic_Beauty_nz
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 03:57:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Pondering over what life is about
Leaving the mind within no doubt
Our journey travelled with lessons hard
Times to hold to, times to discard
Swallowed up by a selfish pity
Forgetting how it could really be
Not feeling worthy, not bothering to hear
The words of God within your ear
Have Faith and Believe are two words you know
Trust in yourself and let the Trust grow
Nurture it well with the choices you make
The changes unfolding are no mistake
Think not what you want but that which you need
Life is for living not surrounded by greed
Contentment and peace you can achieve
Step by step as you Believe
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Re: Step by Step
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by stover on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:31:23 PM AEST
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I HAVE REALLY ENJOYED THIS PIECE AND THE RHYTHM IS THERE. LAERNING THESE TRUTHS HAVE BEEN A REAL ADVENTURE FOR ME AND I HAVE MORE THAN A FEW SCRAPED KNEES TO SHOW WHERE I'VE BEEN.
PEACE,
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Re: Step by Step
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:34:04 PM AEST
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| A excellent poem with a beautiful and thoughtful message. I wouldn't have classified it as Oops, though. |
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Re: Step by Step
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:53:19 PM AEST
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Very good write.
huggs,
emy |
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