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SHOULD I SHINE?
Contributed by
teinos
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:34:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Should I Shine?
should i shine wen life is a struggle should i shine wen im low should i shine or should i let it go?
i hope u understand dis niggah been killing niggahs he want stop till he hurt er this murderer wont stop till he b murdered thugs be crazin put that ***** down u b raizin and put dat blunt out u be blazen niggah u jus be faizen frontin to all those hu cant see thru u dumb *** niggah u aint a niggah i be needin id rather put a bullet thru u so u b bleedin u be on the front of a magazine that ur mama wont even be readin
u put gurls down wen u cant get none thinkin u a pimp thinkin u gon get done wen the playa get played he be in a rage u should act ur age instead of crying to ur mama she dnt want ur drama its called *****in karma even tho she be there for u u still harm er
should i shine wen life is a struggle should i shine wen im low should i shine or should i let it go
i aint gone let it go imma keep rollen wit my baby daddy and the pram he be strollen im the only be he be holdin wen its cold n no one to hold he be telling me to look at the stars he be there except for all the other dumb*** baby daddys hu b behind bars my boo he be driving the minta cars
should i shine (imma shine) wen life is a struggle (aint no struggle) should i shine (i shine) wen im low (i aint low) should i shine (imma shine) or should i let it go (dun let it go)
imma shine i aint got no struggle i shine cause i aint low imma shine but imma let this ***** go
to all those niggahs not wearin rubbers with baby mothers u can get ***** if u cant stand and be a man hu da whore gun get sum lil kiddies knockin on there door stop killin use rubbers be smart earn them dollars for dem mean whip cars ...insted of a homo ass niggah gettin raped behind bars...
diss be a poem from ma gurl freedom she wrote diss in a book b4 she committed suicide so yeh she was a gurl without a baby daddy and she got pregnant and her baby is now 2 yrs old named jacquia holla for my gurl its the only lyrics i could understand. please leave a message dun curr if ya dun like it can ya juss place a rate and imma holla.
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Re: SHOULD I SHINE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by hooray_its_jen on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:23:31 AM AEST (User
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Great write! : )
I especially loved these lines:
should i shine (imma shine)
wen life is a struggle (aint no struggle)
should i shine (i shine)
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Re: SHOULD I SHINE?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:24:33 PM AEST (User
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wow i have often wonder what a rap piece would look like on paper. The spelling alone is amazing and when you read it ya cant help but git a accent eh.
Nice write Bro :-)
Peace
Whisper |
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