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Tear
Contributed by
Yuri
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:29:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A lonely tear
dripped down my cheek
like liquid fire
that burned so deep
A tear fell
to the ground
it dripped into my wound
like sacred fire
it slowly consumed
what was left of my soul
that slowly consumed
my small heart turnrd to coal
the evil that's there
like so much dread
the evil that's there
leaves me cold and dead
so cold and unfeeling
so bitter and weak
restrains me in chains
a feeling so bleak
Copyright ©
Yuri
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2005-04-08 22:29:07]
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Re: Tear
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:52:34 PM AEST
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| sad, yet beautiful, it brings my feeling of being trapped out and inspires me |
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Re: Tear
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:57:39 PM AEST
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| Hey, that was a very NiCe... I loved it ! Very Very Great Write ! Wow.. amazing hehe ^_^ |
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Re: Tear
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by Yuri on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:35:20 AM AEST
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| Thank you. I guess it's a good start to my writers block. |
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Re: Tear
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by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 09:33:50 AM AEST
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| i liked this very much. i felt everything. thank you for sharing. great work. |
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