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The Breaking Point
Contributed by
kyarn
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:21:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There is a line.
A point,
Dividing good and evil.
People from monsters.
Something breaks
that can never be fixed.
Don't find yourself
on the other side
looking back at humanity
over the ruins of your soul.
It makes you stronger.
Faster.
Deadlier.
But the cost is too high to pay,
In blood .
In death.
In your own humanity.
You wake something,
Create something,
Much better left alone.
Asleep.
Unmade.
The ice gathers around your heart,
Never to be undone.
Never to leave you alone.
And it kills you.
Slowly.
From the inside out.
Stabbing you
with shards
of your shattered conscience.
It drains you
until you are a hollow shell.
With a heart of stone.
Frozen blood.
Frosty tears.
And still it pulls,
Drains you away,
Until at last,
There is no line.
Copyright ©
kyarn
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2005-04-28 09:21:42]
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Re: The Breaking Point
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:52:17 AM AEST
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Very well said.
Once one reaches that point there is no return.
You are demonized.
Cold inside.
Love unable to realize
I liked your poem.
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Re: The Breaking Point
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by Kiira on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:53:22 AM AEST
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nice...i felt like i was right in the poem with you.
~Kiira~ |
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