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Im letting go
Contributed by
cutes252
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 02:33:45 AM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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The confusion is overwhelming Downward spiral into darkness Cant stop the fears, the flow of my tears So scared, so alone Sadness my main emotion Try to let go but cant Just leave me alone Go away and let me be happy Stop haunting me Your in my dreams, in my head, in my heart WHY?? I'm smiling on the outside but screaming on the inside Wont someone please help me? Can't you hear me? IM LETTING GO!!
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Re: Im letting go
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:48:21 PM AEST (User
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I really like the mental pictures you've created. Fine choice of words. Don't ever let go.
Take care.
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