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Burner
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:20:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I've got a fuse, lit, hit
me with another round
of verbal abuse,
it's obtuse,
but I'll use it to
segue to something else.
In my mind is a mad burner.
A stream of thoughts
streaming like DSL,
kinda like hell,
but too soon to tell
if it will go, or it will stay,
by the way....
Crack kills like adrenal thrills,
manic spills are like dollar bills,
fun when you have it,
lethal when it fills
you with a false pride,
but why wonder why?
Random is as random does,
a riddle if there ever was
a way out of such an eclectic narrative
I surely have not found one.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
... [
2005-05-25 19:20:09]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Burner
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:35:46 PM AEST
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Crack is a real killer, and not only to the users but to the families involved. Poem flows fairly well.
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Re: Burner
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:47:26 PM AEST
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The topic's a bit disturbing, but as far as writes go; this poem is good.
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Re: Burner
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by kydistortion69 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:58:46 PM AEST
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| love the poem..has a fast and furious vibe..not the movie..just really intense |
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Re: Burner
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by ElatedNBliss on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:49:18 PM AEST
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| i like that...random is as random does. very nice. :) |
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