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Result
Contributed by
Versigh
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Why is everything so bloody?
This wasn't supposed to be messy
Just quick and simple without much effort
I'm tired out, drained of energy
Why did you do that?
No response, I figured that
Questions left unanswered
I guess my rage got the best
Oh well, your mine forever now
I control you
I am your Gepetto
I shall clean up your corpse
attach strings to your limbs
pluck and pull, bringing each piece to life
Your dead, I don't know why it should matter to you
They'll never find your body
If they do, they'll mistake it
Liveliness will mask the deathliness
I'll store you in my closet
Everyday i'll pull you out and perfect you
By the time i'm finished, you'll be better
Consumed with no other thoughts other than pleasing me
Don't worry though, in the process i'll refresh your heart
Everybody deserves to feel pain
you could have prevented this
All you had to do was ask for what you wanted
But you didn't, you upset me, you confused me
You killed me, so I killed you
But I am very much alive
and you, you are just my new doll
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Versigh
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2005-05-25 19:40:29]
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Re: Result
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by ElatedNBliss on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:55:11 PM AEST
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| awesome .... just straight up awesome!!! i would of loved to see your eyes when u wrote this.... deep in concentration with a wicked glem in your eyes. love it. i know others may think this is kind of dark..but i think dark poetry or sad poetry at times can have more meaning than happy go lucky love poems you know? |
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