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Wonderland Wizards And Yellow Brick Roads
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 08:50:19 AM in AEST
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Last night
the cat in the hat were hanging out
talking bout sam I am
and trying to understand
what green eggs and ham was about
then Alice texted me
she was vexed
and could I come down
something bout the red queen
come go to the rabbit hole now
So I took the yellow brick road out of town
to the enchanted forest
where talking monkeys were flying around
I ran into Eltons Alice
talking about how she feels
couldnt pay attention got to stoned
from the poppies in the field
while listening to the songs about grey seals
now I am wondering
if that grinning cat in the trees is real
and what is his deal
Wonderland wizards and yellow brick roads
weave a tale in my mind
on a strange kind of flow
into the burning confusion I go
where the outer limits
mingle with the twi light zone
The landscape keeps changing
but
I can not stop what has begun
I continue on
I have to reach Alice
before the morning sun
arriving at my destination
I hear someone screaming
off with her head
but I can not come in
because the door mouse is dead.
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Re: Wonderland Wizards And Yellow Brick Roads
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 04:34:02 PM AEST
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This gave me a laugh- thank you. I was definitely grinning from ear to ear reading along on this whimsical adventure. Sounds like quite the night!
I loved the third stanza especially and how it flowed together. Good one.
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Re: Wonderland Wizards And Yellow Brick Roads
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 11:34:01 PM AEST
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Like totally groudy to the max..
This was like way kool dude.
I mean like really fly bro...
Holy wizard lizard.....
You be the man....👻👻👻
The bomb....😀
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Re: Wonderland Wizards And Yellow Brick Roads
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 10:38:41 PM AEST
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I found this quite quirky and off the wall, which is never a bad thing.
Reminds me what a great tool the imagination is and how we should nurture and keep it burning brightly.
Too many people stagnate in this world, I am glad you are not one of them
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Re: Wonderland Wizards And Yellow Brick Roads
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 01:00:21 AM AEST
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| Still digging it down in my rabbit hole.... |
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Re: Wonderland Wizards And Yellow Brick Roads
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by alicewhite on
Monday, 12th October 2020 @ 03:40:34 PM AEST
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Reading this again in the now!!
Can I just say (wow)!!!
And upon reading it now again
(HOW)!!!???
Green eggs and ham
Is radio synals AL s
Lingo
AL
Go
RYTHYMS
VEXED is
Angry poetry but collapsed in to
Science fiction,
Elton is alive
Elvis is schrodingers cat in the black box black block time hat
Men in black
Twin TWI light zone is
Mysterious World
Child hoods end is there/'/s no place like home
Arthur c Clarke is on the silver line
Red Queen
Lady lazarus
Putting you through to fractal spacetime
Please hold
Chapstick
Indrid Cold. |
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