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Look to the Sky
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 02:35:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wonder why
I ponder to the sky
glancing real high
at the atmosphere
on a warm morning
when birds are still flying
my mind is almost clear
when night rises
stars go by
on a late afternoon
under the moon
humble as it is
my worries almost gone
as I look to the sky
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Re: Look to the Sky
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by Spike on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 10:32:39 PM AEST
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Have to agree with the sentiments, having the same triumverate of troubles. I would have worked stanza 2 a little differently, as 'a late afternoon under the moon' (that would be twilight) is noticeably incongruous.
Good mood setter, though.
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