|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Broken
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:59:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Break these chains that steal my sanity
raving so rhythmically they taunt me
In anguish I resign to this bloody splendour
lacing my grief through a web of capture
evoke a song weary yet divine
silken and sensuous becomes the rapture of time
radiating lustful glances the slay the soul
a violent love so perpetual
brilliance that rapes the weak whilst they hide
In harmony our foes silently glorify
Copyright ©
bonita2689
... [
2004-11-13 08:59:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:52:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| The more i read this poem the more it flowed, like a balad of bloodied tears, a sorrow of deep resign, beautifully written and masterfully composed. |
|
|
Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:10:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice use of language. Good write! |
|
|
Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:48:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem was amazing...it flowed so wonderfully, and it WAS like a ballad of bloodied tears...amazing
Mason |
|
|
Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:18:20 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good job, I really liked this. I have felt like this before..like im about to go insane lol. But dont worry, things will get better =) |
|
|
Re: Broken
(User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:08:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| great write i loved it vey much |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
